by Michael Cheary
Still stuck writing your postgraduate personal statement?
If you’ve decided to continue studying after finishing uni, applying for a postgraduate place can sometimes seem like a daunting prospect. And putting together a compelling personal statement is a big part of the process – especially on the most competitive courses.
We’ve already covered how to write your personal statement, but here are some postgraduate personal statement examples to help inspire you:
Personal statement for a master’s degree
It can be easy to think that if you meet the admission criteria, you’re guaranteed a place on a master’s course.
But just because they’re the most common type of postgraduate qualification, it doesn’t mean master’s degrees aren’t competitive – and your personal statement could be the difference between landing your ideal place or not.
This means you should always steer clear of generic statements, and from referencing anything else you’ve already written elsewhere in your application.
Instead, you should clearly explain why you’ve applied for your chosen course, what attracts you to the university, and the skills you have that will set you apart.
Here’s an example of a personal statement for a master’s degree student:
Download Master's Degree Personal Statement Example
Personal statement for a conversion course
Conversion courses are aimed at students who are looking to study a different subject from their undergraduate degree.
There are many different types of conversion course you could choose, ranging from Law and Psychology through to IT and Tech. Typically they will last around a year, however, this may be longer depending on the subject you choose.
The main things to address in your personal statement are why you want to change subjects, and what makes you the right candidate for the course.
Also, always try and include previous experience you might have (including any applicable modules covered), and where you’d ideally like to see your career going.
Here’s an example of a personal statement for a conversion course:
Download Conversion Course Personal Statement Example
Personal statement for a PGCE
Although they are sometimes considered to be conversion courses, PGCEs have some different requirements when it comes to personal statements.
Part of this comes down to concentrating on the relevance of your previous education experience, and the reasons you see teaching as your perfect profession.
Other good things to cover include any work you’ve done with young people in the past, such as teaching or voluntary positions, former teachers or lecturers who may have inspired you, and any hobbies you may have which require a coaching or teaching element.
Additionally, placing precedence on relevant skills, such as leadership, creativity, enthusiasm, patience and communication skills is a great way to make your application stand out.
Here’s an example of a personal statement for a PGCE:
Download PGCE Personal Statement Example
N.B: The personal statements provided about are intended to be examples, NOT templates. To avoid any potential penalties for plagiarism, and to increase the effectiveness of your application, always tailor your personal statement for each course you apply for.
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How to write a personal statement for Masters courses
A good personal statement can mean the difference between getting an offer and being rejected. Your personal statement should show us that you are the right person for the course.
Learn how to:
Planning your personal statement
A personal statement is a piece of writing that you submit as part of your application. It is a statement of academic interests and should not contain any autobiographical information about your personal life.
Instead, it should show us that you are the right person for Sussex by telling us why you want to study your course, and any extra information about your achievements to date.
See our Masters courses for more information
When you have finished planning your personal statement, you can use our postgraduate application system to start your application.
You need to:
- carefully read the information required of you
- research the course you are applying for, so that you can explain why you want to study it. If you are applying for more than one course, do not use the same statement for all applications.
The following questions may help you plan your personal statement:
- Why do you want to study a Masters and how will it benefit you?
- How does the course fit your skill set?
- How do you stand out from the crowd - e.g. work experience?
- What are you aspiring to be/do in your future career?
- How can your work contribute to the department/University/society?
If you're applying for a subject that is in a different field to your undergraduate degree, tell us why you have decided to change your direction of study.
- how you will bring fresh insight to your course as a result of your undergraduate degree
- the reasons for deciding to change your field of study
- how changing your direction of study will help you with your future career.
Use a tight structure in your personal statement and make sure each paragraph logically follows on from the one before.
Your personal statement must:
- have an eye-catching and interesting introduction, and an engaging middle part and conclusion
- have an introduction that acts as a framework for the rest of your statement, with the main part of your statement detailing your interests, experience and knowledge
- be between 250 and 500 words
- have short sentences of no more than 25-30 words
- use headings (if you wish) to break up the content - for example, 'Why this university?' 'Why this subject?' 'Ability', 'Personal experience' and 'Career aspirations'
- use a sentence structure where you: make a claim and back this claim up with evidence. This can be achieved by talking about your work experience and academic interests.
'My passion for Psychology stems from my interest in how dementia affects the personality of patients suffering with the condition. That's why I spent my gap year working with the Alzheimer's Society, supporting patients and families by visiting them at home and holding surgeries to give sufferers and carers someone to talk to.'
- don't start with cliched and overused sentences: 'I have always wanted to study' or 'I feel I have always had a passion for this subject.' Instead tell us what has influenced you to study this course.
'It was not until my grandmother was diagnosed with Parkinson’s disease and ischaemic dementia that the link between brain functioning and cognition became a passion.
Although a most unpleasant experience, the enormity of the precision at which the brain functions to produce our cognitive abilities, socially acceptable behaviours and intricate physiological processes astounded me.
I found myself questioning the cognitive functions and human behaviours I had previously just accepted, desperate to understand how the unseen and seemingly small entities within the brain could impact our daily behaviour.'
- the conclusion should sum up your main points, reflect on your main accomplishments and clearly show your desire to study.
Your personal statement is where you show us your commitment, dedication and motivation for studying the course. It is your chance to show us the course is for you.
Your personal statement should:
- give strong reasons as to why you want to study the course at Sussex. This could be for your future career or because of the University's reputation
- mention relevant study - including projects, dissertations, essays - or work experience
- provide evidence of your key skills including, research, critical thinking, communication, organisation, planning and time-management and show how you can contribute to the department
- show what makes you stand out as a candidate
- explain who your main influences have been and why
- draw on your other experiences: for example are you a member of a society, have you written any papers or won any awards, scholarships or prizes?
- highlight your career aspirations and show how the course will help you achieve them.
See an example personal statement [PDF 31.95KB]
Your tone should be positive and enthusiastic. It should show your willngness to learn and persuade us you have what it takes to suceed on one of our courses.
- use fresh and exciting language to make your application stand out, and use engaging opening paragraphs
- use accurate grammar, punctuation and spelling
- use clear language in short sentences and avoid extravagant claims
- avoid using generic terms and talk specifically about the course.
Don't: 'I was inspired by the University's world-renowned researchers and world-leading facilities.'
Do: 'I was inspired to study Animal Biology because of the groundbreaking work into the behaviour of bees that is being led by Sussex Professor Francis Ratnieks. I follow the work of the University of Sussex Laboratory of Apiculture and Social Insects and would be proud to study in such a renowned department and contribute to its highly ranked research.'
- proofread your statement and ask a friend or relative to read it.
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